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Trust and Toilets
Author: Kallie Thomas
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(Added on Dec 11, 2003)
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Basic tale of a trusting young girl in need and the greasy creep who ingratiates himself, gains her trust through promises of aid. Pretty scummy story, if I do say so myself. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
yishabeia
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Dec 17, 2010 |
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It's like beauty and beast story but the beast was worst of kind. Writing this kind of charactor with such a short story shows how talented the author is. (10/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Sep 1, 2007 |
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Another YIKES story by Kallie! Your stories are so awful and yet they make me soooo very wet!! (9/10)
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headhunter
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Feb 17, 2005 |
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You're right! Pretty scummy story. That's what I liked about it. (9/10)
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bernie
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Jul 22, 2004 |
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Excellent story line...very hot....can't wait till he has to shit....... awesome!!! (10/10)
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Wyn
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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I must admit, we were warned that this would be a pretty scummy story, and the author was right. By the end of the story, my feelings were totally enflamed against the driver. For the author to be able to draw out such feelings is (in my opinion), a mark of her gifted abilities. (10/10)
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sm4hg
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Dec 16, 2003 |
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Although I don't really like this sad story, i must admit it is very well written. Tastes differ and therefore I don't want to judge the contents, but I didn't really enjoy it. Thank God the girl is said to be a teen, although she doesn't act like one. As I said, well written. (9/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Dec 11, 2003 |
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Curses, once again the infamous lex luddite has beaten me to the punch with a trenchant review! And said it better than I could. The nameless "greasy creep" is without doubt the slimiest villian to ever besmirch the electronic pages of this fair site! Previously the only one to come close is that devious Canadian "Snidley Whiplash" who endlessly (and ineptly) pursued "Sweet Little Nell" in "Dudley Doright of the Mounties". To quote Tom Lehrer's "Smut", "More! More! We're still not satisfied".
Might I suggest that in the sequel "the greasy creep" blackmail the girl's mother into sordid deeds. Perhaps a mother/daughter menage a' trois with the daughter plying the whip across the mother's broad buttocks! We need high collared blouses and bondage to railroad tracks. Maybe he can tie her to a log and run her into a sawmill. Or there is always a bit of beastiality with the beloved horse! Home cooked meals featuring heaping bowls of boiled potatoes smothered in butter and pork chops fried in lard. Endless baskets of frilly petticoats to be ironed. This could be the start of a long sordid story. (10/10)
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lex ludite
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Dec 11, 2003 |
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I totally hated this horrible story! Yet I must acknowlege the power and skill of the author for causing such feelings. I thought it strange that the author's synopsis was so negative about the story, but now I can do nothing but agree. I wish it hadn't been written, but it has and it must be recognized for what it is, a brilliant, but depressing masterpiece of the genre. (10/10)
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