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Forever
Author: Dingo Dave
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(Added on Nov 24, 2003)
(This month 52350 readers) (Total 68498 readers) |
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A couples journey into the world of bondage and commitment to each other forever. They grow in their own method of Master/slave relationship. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Sweep
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Aug 20, 2006 |
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Hi Dingo,
I really enjoyed the story. I particularly liked the way the female characted had personality and the high level of consensuality. It was well written and quite realistic.
Well done (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jan 3, 2004 |
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Well written – even simple handcuffs are erotic. Good mutual respect between Sally and Paul.
Some minor things seem out of place - the bracelet being out of wedding rings, the adam's apple, but overall an excellently written story! I loved it! (9/10)
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mkemse
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Dec 13, 2003 |
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Just trying to figure out how one can make a story both consensual and reluctant.
Either the subject is consenting or the subject is not consenting
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
anguisette
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Nov 26, 2003 |
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not a bad start....there were a few errors, however, that glared at me. for one, women don't have adam's apples. so, unless sally's a transvestite, you might want to get rid of that part. there were a few small spelling and grammar errors as well, so maybe try running the story through the spell-checker, or having somebody proof-read it for you. otherwise, i liked the premise so far, and am interested in reading more.... (5/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Nov 25, 2003 |
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Light and erotic. This story is a bit too well crafted for the author to be a complete novice writer. I suspect that they have some experience of writing.
It is my hope that this is the start of a serial because the denoument of the two parts so far is too week to really constitute a climax. So hopefully more is to come. Perhaps a little spanking or bondage. Perhaps a menage with the other couple. Let us see what ensues and I will alter my rating up or down. (8/10)
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