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Games
Author: Sardonicus
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(Added on Nov 12, 2003)
(This month 19489 readers) (Total 44739 readers) |
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A young man moves from Iowa to San Francisco. He is intrigued by an offer for some. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Jun 13, 2006 |
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Great concept and very enjoyable reading. Keep up the good work (9/10)
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SlavePhil
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Oct 26, 2005 |
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I liked it a lot. The electric play was especially interesting. Not so sure about it having to be the SS, though. Otherwise, really hot, and if you do write a sequel, I can't wait to read it. I like all your stories. (8/10)
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bdsmbill
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Jan 5, 2005 |
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Like the other reviewers, I found this storry excellent. Good stories of women torturing men are too rare. (8/10)
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kemosabe
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Nov 13, 2003 |
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The author has a very active imagination. Assuming these are his own fantasies, I look forward to further amplification. An interesting plot not like any that I've seen at this site. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Nov 13, 2003 |
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I'm with crickette on this one, I really enjoyed reading 'Games' - part one.
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You know when I finished reading this story I thought it doesn’t contain a single ‘fuck’ spoken or otherwise and yet its still a red hot read. Without giving away the story line, I can say its different, exciting, and close enough to reality to have you believable it could possibly happen. Oh don’t you just wish?
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I have to say my favourite scene was the one in front of the mirror, what slut!
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My only criticism, and its very minor, is I thought perhaps a few too many sentences began with “I”. I know that’s difficult to avoid in a first person story, but its not impossible, and it just avoids any feeling of repetition. Its like three sentences in a row beginning with the same word or words are ok (its called a tripet and many authors uses them to create impact), but any more can start to jump out in a reader’s head. -
I'm looking forward to reading part two. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Nov 13, 2003 |
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I enjoyed reading Games. I especially liked the ending. The pace of the story was fast and consistent but not so fast that you got lost or couldn't understand it. I loved the storyline as well. What a truly good idea, well overdue. (8/10)
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