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That One Time
Author: Call me Sam
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(Added on Nov 12, 2003)
(This month 11834 readers) (Total 23856 readers) |
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A first person story from the persepective of a completely submissive female. She briefly details her relationship, and then launches into the tale of the one time her master took things too far, and everything turns from painful pleasure into brutally harsh and complete pain. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 11, 2004 |
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wish it wasn't written in first person, make story hard to follow (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
khalidsm
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Nov 20, 2003 |
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It turn me on although it is a little mild for my taste. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slvWriting
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Nov 15, 2003 |
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Well, the story didn't generate heat for me, because I'm not all that into pain just for pain's sake or even extreme torture. You should improve the tenses, you go from present tense to past tense and back to present tense, you should be consistent throughout the story. (5/10)
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