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Tara's Adventures
Author: Taraghost
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(Added on Nov 5, 2003)
(This month 61750 readers) (Total 128139 readers) |
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A story based on a woman's real life experiences. Throughout her life she had been in control and strived to excel. She thought she had achieved what she wanted until an extended vacation with her best friend brought out her true sexually submissive self. She is quickly drawn into a world, she had only fantasized about, by her friend. Her training soon brings out her true desires and nature. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Master Alan
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Mar 10, 2005 |
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I would like to know why there hasn't been a recent update to this story. It is a very excellent story and worthy of the ratings it has gotten.
However, the author is quite lackadaisal in posting new chapters.
I have enjoyed this story very much. The storyline is very interesting.
The fact that a successful business woman can be brought to her knees by her own desire to be used is exciting. This story reminds me of blairbrek's and Dana Williams' stories.
I can see many ways Tara can experience her true submissiveness after her "vacation" ends.
More chapters are needed SOON to satisfy my appetite for more of this great story.
Keep up the good work!!! (8/10)
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bracemaiden
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Oct 23, 2004 |
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First and foremost, paragraphs seem to be an afterthought at first, but gets better as the story goes on. The beginning is also a a bit redundant, but that, like a fine wine, improves with age. I am amazed by the claim of it being "true life experiences"; too much was far into the realm of fantasy, such as the
super-aphrodisiac perfume and the wand that unlocks the clothes.
Enough bitching for one review. I enjoyed the butt-plug and dildo action. The sperm sprewing forth over Tara's body is also wonderfully slutty. The story kept moving, and kept interesting. I would sure enjoy reading some more!
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
taraghost
(Edit) (Oct 25, 2004)
- Thank you for your review of my story. This story is BASED on true life experience but as with most writers I do use a little litery licence. As for the "perfume", I must admit a bit of an "exageration" of there. The wand used to open the locks however are real, much like the "speed passes" gas stations use, these are based on magnetics. For you and all of the fans of "Tara's Adventure's" rest assured that I am currently working on 12 additional chapters of this story.
P.S. I keep meaning to repost Chapter 1 in a more readable form.
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| Reviewer:
easyrolf
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Sep 14, 2004 |
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it makes appetite for more (9/10)
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- Replied by:
taraghost
(Edit) (Sep 15, 2004)
- Thank you for your review. Be assured there will be more to Tara's Adventures as I find the time to complete the many chapters already started and edit them.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 5, 2004 |
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i hope there are many more chapters to cum (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Jan 30, 2004 |
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Very good story. Details are great, but Tara's background is still a bit mysterious. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
taraghost
(Edit) (Mar 25, 2004)
- Two new chapters should be included in the next update. Chapter 5 - Reflections should help to give an insight into Tara's background.
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| Reviewer:
XtremeInk
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Dec 4, 2003 |
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The Good:
The story is good, although after chapter one I still don't have a good sense of the main character. The action, however, is extremely hot! Grest sex scenes in this one.
The bad:
The writing is done in first person and, unfortunately, suffers for it. First person is hard to write in and the tense shifts and occasional lapses into 3rd person somewhat detract from the story. This thing would rate at least a 9.5 if it were written in 3rd person.
Looking forward to more though! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
taraghost
(Edit) (Mar 25, 2004)
- Please refer to jbowler65.
I do understand that writing in first person can be difficult but the Stories in Book 1 require it. Subsequent Books will be written in the third person as more characters are added to the story. It is our hope that we will be able to influence your review to gain a higher rating.
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| Reviewer:
easy
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Nov 16, 2003 |
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Loved the story.Cant wait for part 2 (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Nov 12, 2003 |
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Great story. I am definately ready for part II. It had a nice flow to it and was detailed just enough. I would like to suggest that you break up the text some. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Master_JoeHippy
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Nov 7, 2003 |
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A very well written story. I do agree that the paragraphs could have been shorter. It will be interesting to see where this goes... (8/10)
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Jacen
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Nov 7, 2003 |
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I feel a little bad being the first one to review this.. It seems like a well written and detailed story, but the paragraphs are massively large, and are in serious need of division into 4 or 5 smaller, more redable paragraphs. Perhaps an edit of this before more chapters are posted? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
taraghost
(Edit) (Mar 25, 2004)
- We are currently working on a repost.
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