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Here Kitty-kitty
Author: slave ruthie
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(Added on Oct 11, 2003)
(This month 11735 readers) (Total 26482 readers) |
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The tale of a rather special cat burglar and her not-so-innocent prey! |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Oct 20, 2005 |
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Cute kitty piece. Nice warm up...interlude...for the rest of your work. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Nov 3, 2005)
- thank you, nikita :)
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| Reviewer:
Onid
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Aug 3, 2005 |
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Always hard to get depth with a short story, but it was a nice easy read, with adequate attention to detail. I'm a fan of build up and detail - so perhaps its just personal preference here. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Aug 4, 2005)
- ohh how right you are - i really struggled and re-wrote this somany times until i got sick of it for a while! the challenge here was the brief from Master Ira of Hustler's Taboo, that it had to be soemthing that they could publish and not be too severe AND be of a certain size, and that Master Gary Roberts could possibly illustrate...as it turned out, the Ashcroft morality crack-down probably made life so difficult for the American porn publication market that it never got used (and it might not have been good enough anyway!)
my only regret is that i would have LOVED to see what Master Gary might have drawn to illustrate it!
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Apr 27, 2005 |
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Good story. I loved the plot of the story and the whole, non-chalant, matter-of-fact attitude of the couple. They deinately made the story. The story was well-written and had an excellant flow. Everything just seemed to fall in place. The title of the story means so much more now (smile). I hope to read more of your work in the future. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Jun 3, 2005)
- You are very kind :)
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Nov 22, 2004 |
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Considering the intended audience, it's a 10! Tightly focused and light hearted, well done! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Dec 1, 2004)
- thank you very much for your kindness, longrover - i'm glad you enjoyed it :)
love & respect
ruthie
XXXXXX
www.slaveregister.com/763339
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 18, 2003 |
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Until the last few paragraphs I was planning to give a '9'. I know you're famous for "The Organization Series", but I enjoyed this MUCH more. I must say the humor escaped me (maybe that was the final few paragraphs?). (8/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2003)
- uhh 'famous'- me??? lol
the attempt at humour was the play on cat-suit, cat-burglar and all the feline stuff without being too corny or over the top (sigh)
thanks very much for reviewing it :)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Oct 14, 2003 |
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Very sexy without reading like a gynaecologist's report.
On the nit picky side, I don't like the use of things like 'Uuuuuuhhhhh!" and "sooo", or too many words in capitals as I feel they're distracting and I don't really believe they add any extra impact.
Otherwise, in my opinion, a very well written piece with plenty of interesting options to follow on with. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2003)
- thanks :) i think the loooooong words (lol) would be cut out in the printed version (if it happens) - guess its my style i'm afraid ;)
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Oct 11, 2003 |
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Good, till now. I like the subtle touch of humor without overdoing it. Keep it up. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
slave ruthie
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2003)
- ohh i'm so glad you found the humour - i'm trying to copy in soem way what Gary Roberts achieves in His BDSM art, where there's humour (very dry, very black) but not slapstick which i try to avoid - i wrote and re-wrote this one LOADS and hope it might be used in print so had to make it much gentler and less non-consenting (bloody hard i can tell you!)
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