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Mary Jane Author: obohobo
(Added on Oct 7, 2003) (This month 48468 readers) (Total 69396 readers)
Forced by her parents to become a live-in housekeeper to a man eight years her senior, Mary becomes unwillingly embroiled in a BDSM Christmas party.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (8/10)

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Reviewer: theroadtoad (Edit) Rating: Jun 23, 2008
Very nice story,I enjoyed it. (8/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Dec 22, 2006
they do not cum much better then this (10/10)

Reviewer: longrover (Edit) Rating: Apr 26, 2005
I have read and favorably reviewed some of the author's other work on this site. I have also skipped some of his work. This story falls between the two groups.
There is no question that it has a high quality plot, two well developed characters, and is well written. Under the site's single code scheme, it's a 9 but I can't say I enjoyed the Christmas party. Fair warning -- some may view what follows as a spoiler.
The assigned codes are correct, but there's nc and then there's nc, especially in a realistic story. In "The Old Rectory" and "Bag Lady" the nc is limited or due to an unsympathetic character; coding them Reluctant rather than nc might be reasonable. Here, it is at the center of the story.
I tried to let the male lead off the hook by thinking of him as young, but he's no college freshman. In the States, a graduate student at his stage of a doctorate would be 24 or older, old enough to know better.
The title character made her lack of interest in the things his friends enjoyed known early, clearly, and often. He had no grounds to think she would enjoy herself.
Her weakness was wanting to get away from home so badly that she trusted him against her own judgement. Agreeing to continue with him was a far more valuable present than his gift to her. Even in a story on a site like this, calling the cops would have been more believable. (9/10)

Reviewer: countrygirl9662 (Edit) Rating: Oct 14, 2003
Bravo!!! Very well written and held my attention to the very end. (9/10)

Reviewer: Lord Douche (Edit) Rating: Oct 10, 2003
Excellent story, and a nice ending. A few little grammatical glitches, but apart from those, perfect. (9/10)

Reviewer: e.e. norcod (Edit) Rating: Oct 8, 2003
oboyoboyoboy another story by obohobo! This one I am going to slowly savor rather than gulping down. A great opening! (reviewed after reading only the first download). (9/10)

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