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The Guest
Author: Kiri
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(Added on Sep 27, 2003)
(This month 9489 readers) (Total 21109 readers) |
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A submissive woman and her young lover have a houseguest. Her limits are pushed with light humiliation. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
mtlcouple
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Feb 5, 2007 |
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Nice story. Well written. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Aug 7, 2005 |
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I enjoyed reading, The Guest. It was easy to understand and follow. It was romantic in an off beat sort of way. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Nov 9, 2003 |
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I have to agree with the previous reviews that there is a lack of detail to the story. The pace just seems rushed. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Oct 12, 2003 |
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The main character is hardly developed. She just seems to jump right into things with no past character developement which would be an improvement. (7/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Sep 29, 2003 |
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Competent prose although a little rough in spots. I gave a low rating because there was neither novelty of plot nor was the young submissive wife's character as well developed as I would have liked. The only truly pleasing facet of the story was Florence. And at that the location was not partiuclarly well utilized to cast color or mood.
Satisfactory for a first effort. Next time work on developing your location better, more fully develope Kirikitty's thoughts, feelings and motivation, and work on some novelty of plot. But above all keep at it. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 29, 2003 |
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Hope there is more to come
would love more Nonconsentual thmem added, really humiliate her, push her to and way beyond her limits, make her ask herself what she got herself into (9/10)
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