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A Proper Lesson
Author: Fidelis Blue
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(Added on Sep 24, 2003)
(This month 11951 readers) (Total 20398 readers) |
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An unexpected visitor arrives during her visit to the schoolroom. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Oct 3, 2003 |
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Fidelis, is it possible that you just keep getting better and better? Another very nice job! (9/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Sep 24, 2003 |
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The ending warrants the ten. Competent writing up to that point, but the twist and insight into the character raise this short story to the top. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Sep 24, 2003)
- Thank you again for these kind words. There is nothing like being appreciated to make one try harder.
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