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The Novice Master
Author: Fidelis Blue
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(Added on Sep 24, 2003)
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A young man is shown how to discipline a submissive, and takes full advantage. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Oct 3, 2003 |
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Antoher fine work from this writer. Brisk and with that simple Fidelis-flare that we have come to know and love **smile** (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 1, 2003 |
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Only wish it was more Nonconsenual rather then Consensual (8/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2003)
- yes, but that would be another story, wouldn't it!
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Sep 24, 2003 |
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kVery good job, perhaps your best effort to date. The c.p. scenes are excellent. Now expand the details, increase the "color" of the mood and slow the pace and you are there. This is one of your best attempts are drawing character to date. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Sep 24, 2003)
- It's probably good advice, though it's not always easy to stop the story going where it will.
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