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Stripped of her Womenhood
Author: Pat Arnoldi
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(Added on Sep 15, 2003)
(This month 35916 readers) (Total 61676 readers) |
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A women is abused shortly after moving in with her boyfriend. Her fantasy of happily ever after is soon crushed when he proceeds to rape her and strip her of her womenhood by removing her clitoris. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 20, 2008 |
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Intresting (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
gojack10
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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How erotic! A boyfriend who cuts the clit off his gf. I'm looking forward to being similarly aroused when he decides to give her a bilateral masectomy, and then a hysterectomy. It deserve s ZERO, but I generously rated it a 2.
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| Reviewer:
castle2001
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Oct 1, 2003 |
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Unique plot line. Your writing will improve in time.
Keep at it.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Sep 24, 2003 |
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I needs work on the grammar but it certainly paints an ugly picture a very ugly picture! (6/10)
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jbowler65
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Sep 21, 2003 |
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Interesting storyline, but very difficult to read with numerous mistakes in grammar and punctuation. Sentences seem to run on and the lack of paragraphs is also a problem. The story itself was good, but more details are needed to clear up what is going on. (3/10)
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woolfighter
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Sep 19, 2003 |
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The story is well written (with mistakes)and quite erotic. Well done. (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Sep 19, 2003 |
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A mixed result as is typical of an early work of fiction. Yes the grammar could use improvement and style/flow could be better. But this (infundibulation by a vet plus sodomy) plot is a bit novel. Furthermore, the character of the husband with his need to control the sexuality of his wife, partiuclarly his fears of her obtaining sexual pleasure from other men is great. In the BDSM literature there is almost never insight generated as to WHY the characters do something! This author should keep at it, nothing tends to improve writing more than more writing. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Sep 17, 2003 |
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The imagery is alright, but more attention could be paid to the writing style: the errors grate. Especially when there's one in the title and another in the opening sentence.
Womanhood. With an a.
Couldn't have.
Farther and further. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lord Douche
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Sep 16, 2003 |
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A few criticisms.
Is he her husband or boyfriend?
One finger up her ass is "Excruciating", and then she takes a 3" cock?
A few more paragraphs would make things easier to read as well.
Apart from those things, not bad work. (6/10)
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