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Becky's Training
Author: Mr. Stefens
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(Added on Aug 12, 2003)
(This month 16342 readers) (Total 37752 readers) |
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A young ruffian teasing the older men on the streets of Seattle is kidnapped and introduced to a new life. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tandrancer
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Dec 21, 2015 |
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I really enjoyed the story...it was well thought out, highly descriptive, and quite stimulating....I would like to see either more of it or more like it (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 4, 2006 |
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needs editing big time (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Deemaster
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Sep 17, 2003 |
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Author needs to proof read his contributions before submission as the errors detract from the reader's enjoyment. Tale could have been developed and improved. (4/10)
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lex ludite
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Aug 14, 2003 |
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A good beginning filled with passion, a wealth of detail and plenty of heat. On the down side this story has been told by literally hundreds, perhaps even thousands of writers, and at this point doesn't appear capable of separating itself from the pack. Obviously the writer's passion overwhelmed his editing skills towards the conclusion of this chapter, a minor problem that can be easily addressed in the future. (7/10)
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