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Joey's Detention
Author: Mr. Stefens
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(Added on Aug 12, 2003)
(This month 31264 readers) (Total 70359 readers) |
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A school Headmaster has an obsession with a young schoolgirl under his authority. He finally has her alone and secured for punishment. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (9/10) |
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 4, 2006 |
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when anyone reads a good hot story it shows in therating and the story itself, way to go (10/10)
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Reviewer:
msil
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Aug 23, 2005 |
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Literate and hot, usually don't like first-person or anything with schoolgirls, but this gets past my prejudices. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Aniga
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Jun 23, 2004 |
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One of the best descriptions of the physical results of a cane stroke that I have read in the last few years. Particularly powerful were the description of how he wanted Joey, and what he wanted from her. Looking forward eagerly to more... (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Lord Douche
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Aug 15, 2003 |
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Excellent story. My only problem was that Joey didn't say anything during the start. Interested to know what further punishment she will get ;) (9/10)
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Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Aug 15, 2003 |
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This one is a particular favorite of mine and was the inspiration for one of my own stories. So I'm biased, who isn't? (10/10)
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