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Her First Foray Into Submission Author: bayou_sub
(Added on Aug 12, 2003) (This month 9066 readers) (Total 16862 readers)
A young woman is gently led into the softer side of submission.

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: deepbluemm (Edit) Rating: Apr 11, 2004
bayou has written such an honest story. A real chance to see this beautiful woman from the inside. A great read! (9/10)

Reviewer: boccaccio2000g (Edit) Rating: Aug 16, 2003
Just OK, I thought. The story has a piquant Cajun flavor to it, but most of the paragraphs are much too long. The first paragraph, which is so important in a short story, suffers from numerous shifts between present tense and past tense. But the author does a nice job of capturing the intensity of the moment; the story reads like it may have been an actual incident. (5/10)

Reviewer: Lord Douche (Edit) Rating: Aug 15, 2003
It's always nice to read a softer story every now and then. (9/10)

Reviewer: cutieinkansas (Edit) Rating: Aug 14, 2003
This story was not only enjoyable but fun to read. This story helped me visualize what was going on where some stories don't. I highly recommend this one! (10/10)

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