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Dominique
Author: Sir_Nathan
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(Added on Aug 7, 2003)
(This month 48653 readers) (Total 79881 readers) |
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Office girl is seduced by a Dominant Male. How well she copes is a testament to the beauty of her submissive nature. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
crimsonkiss69
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May 16, 2006 |
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Excellent read..I look forward to more please (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 8, 2005 |
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The story was boring and the style of writing too bright and yet empty. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
ginagina333
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Nov 5, 2003 |
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This was an excellent story that this girl enjoyed thoroughly. It is her hope one day to have such experiences to share and she is grateful for all of the ideas presented, and for the correct grammar in which they were presented. It is always a joy to read something well written. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir_Nathan
(Edit) (Nov 5, 2003)
- Thank you gina, it is always a pleasure to received feedback :-) I have other storis on literotica too if you care to look - www.literotica.com - under " Sir_Nathan "
smiles
Nathan
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| Reviewer:
cateyegirl69
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Oct 21, 2003 |
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Excellent! Great writing, fantastic style, really interesting scenarios. Congratulations. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir_Nathan
(Edit) (Oct 21, 2003)
- lol - sorry for the empty reply, I got ahead of Myself there a little lol.
Well, thank you very much for taking the time to vote and write a review cateyegirl. It is much appreciated. Thank you for this review, it is a pleasant surprise to read that someone finds Your story faultless... smiles.
you can find other stories I have written, and a bio and pic at http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=86133 where you may also vote if it takes your fancy.
Again, thank you for brightening My day.
Nathan
:-)
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| Reviewer:
Minx
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Oct 13, 2003 |
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well done.. have enjoyed reading and will continue to enjoy further installments I'm sure. On a side note, certain areas even caused me goosebumps as you covered topics I've experienced firsthand - almost word for word as you had written them.
Freaky stuff, keep up the great work. :) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ron8nl
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Aug 15, 2003 |
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I did not read it well. I actually only review stories I like one way or another, but since I follow the reviewlist of Emily I looked into it briefly and recognise the type of slow story I hardly pay time to. Interesting form the two way street though.
ron8nl@yahoo.ie
Netherlands (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir_Nathan
(Edit) (Aug 15, 2003)
- "I looked into it briefly and recognise the type of slow story I hardly pay time to." So you didn't even read it? How dare you assume you might review a story you have not read. How dare you vote! I can't believe I am even bothering to respond. I suggest you do not possess the ability to review intelligent stories. You should confine your reviews to stroke stories - try Gosh! mate - it is more your speed. I don't spend weeks writing these things to hear this type of rubbish - intelligent reviews only please! Positive or otherwise - I don't mind - but for Christ's sake read the frigging thing, or don't bother.
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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You have a certain eloquence to your stories! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir_Nathan
(Edit) (Aug 10, 2003)
- Thank you for the kind review Emily.
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