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Shame On You, Mr. Hyde
Author: Dr. Phil
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(Added on Jul 31, 2003)
(This month 92234 readers) (Total 141583 readers) |
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It'a amazing how easy it is to enslave a young man, once you understand how all the parts work! Girls, don't try this at home. A tale of humiliation in 14 parts. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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very good (8/10)
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azrlg17
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Nov 27, 2006 |
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Absolutely unbelievable. And I don't mean that in a good way. I mean unrealistic, inconceivable, absurd, beyond the bounds of reason. Nobody behaves like that.
What does Beverly have to blackmail him after Part 10? His coworkers know. Part of his family knows. He has no friends.
Why did he obey her after the 1st night? Why did he let her make the movie?
I know there are sadistic merciless women out there but in this extremity they are few and far between. How high is the probability that practically ALL of his female neighbors, their friends, ALL his coworkers AND his cousin are like that? Some of these women were supposed to like him. And when his cousin heard him trying to say that they made him do it, why didn't she intervene and try to get him alone?
I would have given this story even a lower score but the grammar and spelling is good.
Oh and there is only one sex scene (apart from masturbation) in the 1st ten chapters. OK, that scene was pretty hot and I get that the author wanted to write a story about humiliation but there should be some balance in there.
You could see that the author tried to top the humiliation and torture in every chapter and it became pretty ridiculous. The scene with the ants is just so over the top it's ridiculous.
(4/10)
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BigCat
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Oct 10, 2005 |
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Absolutely a classic. Perhaps the best of its kind in the genre of male humiliation. (10/10)
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quagmirething
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Aug 7, 2005 |
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This is an old favorite of mine. The seduction and entrapment of a young man via his lusts. It's an enjoyable read, with lots of dialogue. I treasured the initial stages, and the parts where the women had lustful motives of their own. Which brings me to the criticism that too often the ladies seemed unmotivated, sadly including Bev. It would have been divine to see her use the power she held to satisfy some deep need. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
MrStefens
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Aug 17, 2003 |
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Very enjoyable story. The author keeps the action moving and I thought the humiliation scenes were very well done! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
alphaghana
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Aug 8, 2003 |
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Excellent story. I can't help eagerly waiting for next part... (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Aug 6, 2003 |
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A well written story and a believable scenario. Looking forward to seeing the next installment (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Dr. Phil
(Edit) (Aug 8, 2003)
- Thank you. It gets a little more outrageous as it goes on. This was my first attempt at writing a story, and I kept ending it, only to decide to continue with a few more chapters. In that respect, I wound up throwing the kitchen sink at it trying to top each previous chapter for pure humiliation. It became a personal challenge. :-)
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| Reviewer:
ron8nl
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Aug 5, 2003 |
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I am lucky of late. Another tempting story in my no 2. preferred category of real consensual /m D/s. My number 1 category is /f D/s. That means that the slave is female. The story unfolds fast enough and is well written. (8/10)
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Emily
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Aug 2, 2003 |
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Great start! I expect this to be a really good one. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
vanwink
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2004)
- I read your review of the Mr. Hyde stories. If you enjoy this type of fiction, I would be interested in any other material that you know of that is in the same category. Let me know if you have any thoughts on this.
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