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Let's Go!
Author: Kray
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(Added on Jul 31, 2003)
(This month 16933 readers) (Total 31530 readers) |
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Meanwhile he fits her for her abduction, he gives her some anticipations of her new life. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Master T
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Apr 15, 2011 |
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zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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like the concept, but very hard to read (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
brsam
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Aug 4, 2003 |
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The author grammer was a little hard to follow, but it left me wanting to read chapter two. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Kray
(Edit) (Aug 7, 2003)
- Thank you, Brsam, for your compliments, and thank you for the "little".
Unfortunately "Let's Go!" is finished.
But I have in preparation another story "The Cage", that talks abuot a joung girl just abducted.
I will publish it hereafter.
Regards
Kray
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Aug 2, 2003 |
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I presumed this was some kind of a parody on every cliched abduction story ever written, right down to the strange dialogue, super-sized tampons, odd bondage position and torture implements that change from sentence to sentence. Then I stepped back and realized that was not the truth! Too bad, it might have been a much better idea than what has been executed(in more ways than one)here. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Aug 2, 2003 |
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It needs some improvement in its style. It was too matter-of-fact. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Kray
(Edit) (Aug 2, 2003)
- Oh, Emily,
So thank you!
You are the first one who criticizes my contents instead of my (terrible) form.
I would really appreciate a little more extensive comment from you, will you be so kind to send it me?
Regards
Kray
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