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Jenny's Breast Torture
Author: MonochromeGrey
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(Added on Jul 24, 2003)
(This month 98887 readers) (Total 149635 readers) |
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Young girl is taught the pleasure of pain by a new master. At first she is reluctant but as she begins to enjoy their encounters he is unable to satisfy her and must trade her to a more skilled master. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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May 1, 2005 |
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Very well done. Outstanding (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Domination_King
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Nov 27, 2004 |
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This is in my opinion a classic. Something I come back to time and time again for a good read. Well written and grammaticly correct if I may echo the fellow reviewers. A shame though that it has been so long without an update. Hopefully a fresh review might spark some interest? Once again very well written, and most intriguing to the escelating desire for more severe punishment. Only negative thing I can come up with is my own personal distaste for the enema. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jeanne
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Apr 21, 2004 |
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I found your story, Jenny's Breast Torture, to be very well written and - above all - very exciting. I am making it part of my carefully selected collection. It is moving and arousing... the perfect thing for one-fingered browsing.
May I ask a question... In the beginning mention is made of the 'wisps' of blonde hair on Jenny's pubis; later reference is made to her 'shaved' crotch. I did not find any mention of her shearing. Is it simply to be understood that it happened at some time in her induction?
Sorry for this question, which is more in relation with a personal quirk of mine (I cannot find pleasure in the visualisation of a hairy subject) than in any perceived want in your very pleasurable book. (10/10)
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jbowler65
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Apr 21, 2004 |
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Well written story. The details of her breast torture are nicely detailed, but there isn't a real connection with the characters. Perhaps future chapters will give a greater understanding of them. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 20, 2004 |
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age is a huge issue, but the story itself was good, nice detail, keep it going (9/10)
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le forgeron
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Jul 30, 2003 |
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Jenny is a little too young at the start for my taste. This first chapter might gains somehow by
being split in sub-episodes (one for each visit ?).
I wonder about the lower muscles of Jenny torned apart for months. The end is promising, and I
expect a full 'flashback' about the mistress's memory as chapter 2. Then back to Jenny in chapter 3...
The breast-torture description was very well done, but the ending fist might need some tunning to fix the reader's side and feeling (it might be difficult anyway: focusing on Jenny or the mistress, it's a difficult choice but going from one to the other and back is not really pleasurable for the reader I am). (6/10)
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redEva
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Jul 27, 2003 |
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amazingly well written from the technical – grammatical and stylistic point of view, but lacking any real emotion or passion. exceedingly cruel, yet completely consensual, which does take away the joy for reader. to extreme for my taste. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Jul 27, 2003 |
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A whole story having to do with my favorite motif! For joy, I thought. Unfortunately, despite two or three very hot scenes, I found it a bit disappointing. First of all, I would call it consensual rather than reluctant -- and that takes much of the edge out of 'torture' -- (in a fantasy sense, of course). Secondly, I found it strangely passionless. One doesn't sense the visceral thrill of pleasure that the dominant character should have in a story like this. Nor do we get any sense of his character. Or Jenny's for that matter, except in regard to her surrender. Third, Jenny at fourteen is a bit young for my taste. On the plus side, the writer's use of language, and his/her correctness in a grammatically impaired world was refreshing. (7/10)
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griffith82
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Jul 27, 2003 |
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This is indeed good. There are only one or two grammatical errors, and the tension escalates nicely. (7/10)
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ponygirl2000
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Jul 26, 2003 |
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wow, its rare that you get to read something that so well written. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
elsefine
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Jul 25, 2003 |
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among the best (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 24, 2003 |
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Wow, a nicely written story! (7/10)
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