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Shipment
Author: AlwaysCocked
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(Added on Jul 20, 2003)
(This month 15303 readers) (Total 35376 readers) |
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A story of the evolution of mass production in the very distant future, with a twist that might surprise you unless you were paying attention. Almost no sex, but some interesting concepts explored. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
redEva
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Dec 26, 2010 |
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Excellent story. (9/10)
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nominalista
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May 3, 2010 |
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Very dry but very good, like a Martini cocktail. It would be great to see this develop into a vast sex-crazed space opera. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 25, 2009 |
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For once, here's a story with a sci-fi code that is very well done.
Usually, we're taken to Tit-ania where the Evil Queen Twatsika has kidnapped a beautiful betitted Wobble to torture a bit, but the latter is saved by Lara Crotch and in the end we all live as happy tits ever after.
Not there. Here is a well-tought out scenario with lots of technical mumbo-jumbo about the various futuristic appliances. Oh, and there's a plot. With a twist, too. Which is kinda nice for a change.
JJ (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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not big into sci fo but this was good (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Apr 15, 2004 |
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Excellent work, alwayscocked... always nice to find a story that contains some original ideas. The only thing is it doesn't contain much bdsm content. You could have had the tutro create a real bondage bitch and subject her to some nasty alien sex punishment. So where do I send away for one of those? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
daddyshanks
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Nov 16, 2003 |
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Shipment is so consistently clever it's hard to stop thinking about. What springs to mind right now is Kelly's fondness for "bonus checks". That was neat.
Kelly is fun to think about, and the ideas behind Kelly are fun to think about. What really has me going is: Just what exactly is *wrong* with making a Kelly? (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 21, 2003 |
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Wow!! This story is really full of imagination and so wonderfully written, very nice indeed! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
kittenfemme
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Jul 20, 2003 |
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This story is fantastic! I agree with BruceBoxer, in that it was very erotic even without a great deal of typical sexual content. I would love to see it continue. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
castle2001
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Jul 20, 2003 |
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Excellent. Well written and plotted. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
BruceBoxer
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Jul 20, 2003 |
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Outstanding piece of work! Extremely well written, interesting, erotic, --very enjoyable. Only reason I didn't go 10 is that I'm not a sci fi fan have have litlle to compare this with. However, I think I'm going to start reading sci fi now... (9/10)
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