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The Key is in the Cum
Author: Tweak
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(Added on Jul 12, 2003)
(This month 16818 readers) (Total 34111 readers) |
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John is enjoying his most elaborate self-bondage ever when Michelle, his girlfriend,unexpectdly drops by and turns his fantasy into reality. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
SlaveToHer
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Jan 7, 2007 |
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This was a great story and was a unique plot. (10/10)
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BigCat
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Very inventive and clever. Would have liked the Michelle scene drawn with more detail, but well done. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
slvWriting
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Oct 12, 2003 |
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I liked the plot very much and feel completely identified with the main character. If you improve the writing, spelling and grammar, this story could have one or two more stars (8/10)
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trainmanretep
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Jul 18, 2003 |
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a good start to something that could really develop into a great story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 14, 2003 |
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Wow, this story is creative. Who would ever think you could get into so much trouble with self bondage? Nicely written too. Love the scene of her spooning him his own cum! (8/10)
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Mandy
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Jul 12, 2003 |
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The story is really well written given it's authenticity. For those of us who have locked ourselves in bondage leaving only a slim way out and sweating the anxiety of perhaps never getting out of it- this story rings true. The girlfriend discovery is a bit contrived but what the heck- it is a fantasy after all. A few slaps in the face would have been a nice touch given how helpless he was- I would have- given that he had lied to her and decieved her. Nipple pain and smarting facial cheeks are more than deserved.
Mandy (8/10)
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