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Role Playing
Author: sarijak
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(Added on Jun 20, 2003)
(This month 21453 readers) (Total 43656 readers) |
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With her room mate out for the night, Holly turns to her secret books, and the attractions of a persona very different to her normal self. But when her room mate returns early, the lines between reality and fiction begin to blur - for both of them. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 11, 2010 |
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i love this story, plenty of character and action. Very sensous. (10/10)
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Ashantai
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Oct 5, 2008 |
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Very nicely done.
I found it had a lot of character, passion and intensity. Well done. (8/10)
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25toLife
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May 22, 2007 |
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Nicely done! (9/10)
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Perrin
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Apr 19, 2007 |
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Well-written, quick and exciting. Very very good. The last chapter was absolutely amazing. Sure wish there was an rpg like that for real. (9/10)
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BigCat
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Aug 10, 2005 |
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Very well written (10/10)
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jbowler65
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Sep 21, 2003 |
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Very well written and exciting story. We would love to find out the other role playing games Holly and Becky played out during their college years. (10/10)
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Grey Slayer
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Jun 28, 2003 |
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I enjoyed the story. It is well written and I found it erotic. Please continue the tale. (9/10)
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sorceress
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Jun 26, 2003 |
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Enjoyed the story......very good (7/10)
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bdsmbill
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Jun 23, 2003 |
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Very good tale (tail?). I don't usually enjoy girl on girl action as much as I did this. (9/10)
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don11
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Jun 23, 2003 |
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Highly competent and a sense of personality.
Even credible .... (8/10)
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Curtis
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Jun 22, 2003 |
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I'm not quite as enamored with this story as my fellow reviewers, but I agree that it's well written and fairly hot. I think future episodes would be hotter, but I suspect that there won't be any (the author having told the story she wishes to tell). (8/10)
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ms_2b_used
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Jun 20, 2003 |
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Very finely written! This author has the ability to place the reader there in the same room as the main characters! To me it could only have been perfected to a greater degree had the author NOT allowed 'Holly' to reach an orgasm brought about by Becky her new Mistress, but instead, be kept in constant, demeaning and eloquent suffering by her! (9/10)
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Moggy
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Jun 20, 2003 |
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The story is involving from the start and the narrator's character and appearance very well drawn as the tale progresses. Well-written and HOT! (10/10)
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siroco222003
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Jun 20, 2003 |
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Well thought out and well written. Though the ending of this short tale is satisfying, I'd enjoy Holly's further adventures...... (10/10)
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