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The Discipline Punishment
Author: Tuefel Hunden
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(Added on Jun 6, 2003)
(This month 34319 readers) (Total 63183 readers) |
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This is an account of my recent activities with my Mistress and her new pet. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Feb 14, 2004 |
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Loved it – the teasing, the plugs, the clamps, and the caring. The sentence structure (as opposed to the plot) seemed to be passive somehow. I can't explain it, but I’m looking forward to chapter 3! (9/10)
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knotz2u
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Jun 8, 2003 |
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One of the best written stories I've read.....Thanks (10/10)
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kittenfemme
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Jun 7, 2003 |
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This is a very, very, VERY hot tale and reasonably well written. It's not literary genius, but it's easy to follow. There aren't a lot of grammatical mistakes that pulled me from the story. As far as internet pulp goes, this kicks. *purrrr!* More please! Now... if you'll excuse me... I think I need to *ahem* relieve myself. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 7, 2003 |
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Hmph, I'm conflicted again! This story is very hot, but it really needs to be proof-read. There were several mistakes with word choice and phrasing (no spelling errors that I noticed, though), but the story is realistic (aside from too-wide dildos) and actually feels like a reminiscence, rather than a work of fiction. (8/10)
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femmeslave
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Jun 7, 2003 |
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I like this story, its to the point and very nasty. I look forward to reading more from this author. (8/10)
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