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A Difficult Woman
Author: gothgirl
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(Added on May 5, 2003)
(This month 30480 readers) (Total 65415 readers) |
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A dominant man talks about his submissive, and about the value of strength and experience. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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JimmyJump
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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Just splendid.
JJ (10/10)
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slipper
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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Very sensual. I think it exposes the very essence of BDSM - it's not about the ropes and leather and spreader bars and other silly accessories. It's about the mind. The urge to give oneself fully to your Master. Love it. (9/10)
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c-black
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Jul 11, 2006 |
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Truly, the eroticism of this piece is not in the kink, it's in the meeting of minds. The minds are kinky to be sure, but for the closet romance novelist in many of us, despite our tastes for violence in our sex, this is just a great romance story. Few stories are so artfuly crafted and yet so deliciously arousing at the same time. I loved this one. (10/10)
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KITTIG
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Jun 8, 2005 |
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I thought this was super! very insightful and honest. If you are a Dom /Domme / slave or submissive emotions run high for both and this was beautifully written :) more please !! (9/10)
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njduda
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Jan 9, 2005 |
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AWESOMEEEEEEE (10/10)
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emmacd
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Dec 20, 2004 |
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very good start. Nothing like a strong woman who knows her self and what she needs. Ihave played this situation often Keep up the good work. Emma (9/10)
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Wyn
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Feb 13, 2004 |
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Excellent story. Wonderful character depth. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
belinda's DOM
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Jan 26, 2004 |
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This story is the first to speak enough to me to make me want to review it!!!!!Well done and keep up the good work!! (10/10)
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ladys_maid
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May 15, 2003 |
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I thought this was an outstanding story - well written, well told, well done! I very much enjoyed the characterization and pace of the writing - no leaping straight into things. It really built up well and was a genuine pleasure to read. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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May 10, 2003 |
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If this is indeed your first story, gothgirl, it is quite a remarkable debut. I complain constantly about the lack of characterization found in many of the stories here -- but not today. You've done an exemplary job at getting inside the mind of your principals, particularly the woman. Where the story falls short, a bit, for me is that while eroticism surely has its mental component (which you have delineated so well), it has its sensory component, too -- sights, sounds, touches. This story could have used more of that, IMO -- I don't think we know what the characters look like, at all, except that we learn right at the end that the woman has elaborate tattoos and multiple piercings. (On the other hand, I, for one, am thankful that you didn't tell us that at the beginning. Chacun a son gout, but 'body art' is a big turn-off for me.)<br>Be that as it may, though, this is as about as insightful a first story as we're likely to see any time soon. Brava! (9/10)
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traprock
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May 8, 2003 |
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As a submissive woman, I felt understood and honored by your story. The depth, the standards, the boredom, the previous disatisfaction, so clearly described, so easy to make sense of finally.
I'd love to read more about this love story between the two of them. I could do without long needles in the nipples - that kind of freaks me out. But I will read whatever you write in this series.
traprock (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
autumnelixir
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May 8, 2003 |
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Looking forward to more from gothgirl - this is the first story I've read where I've been motivated to register so I could vote! Well done. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
redEva
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May 7, 2003 |
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Sweet (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
don11
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May 6, 2003 |
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Thoroughly enjoyable.
The subtlety is what marks this out.
Look forward to more.
(10/10)
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