|
|
|
|
|
Sophia's First Lesson
Author: ElectricGeisha
|
| |
(Added on May 5, 2003)
(This month 9649 readers) (Total 17112 readers) |
| |
A new slut's mouth is used by her Master for the first time. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 5 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
20% |
20% |
20% |
40% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (9/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (6/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 21, 2003 |
| |
Nicely written, but the author set her (?) sights too low, I think. A brief erotic vignette between two characters that we don't know very well. I don't care for the consensual "slave, whore, slut", name-calling but that's just me. A bigger failing is why this particular woman submits to this particular man -- what is it about him that compels her to surrender to such humiliation/abuse? I didn't get much sense of that. (7/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
ElectricGeisha
(Edit) (May 22, 2003)
- The slave doesn't know what attracts her to such perversity either. I guess she's still trying to find out.
Honestly, that's how I feel. The reason eludes me completely still, perhaps because I haven't even touched this aspect of me in reality. Trust me though, once I find out what I need to, that will make Sophia's other lessons ;)
Thanks for the feedback, darling *hug*
Geisha
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
don11
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 6, 2003 |
| |
Simple tale that is well told.
(8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Powerone
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 6, 2003 |
| |
I loved the story from the point of view of the Sub. A powerful woman during the day, reduced to a sexual outlet for the Master at night, her inner turmoil racing through her mind as she submits to his power. Would love to see more of this.
(9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 6, 2003 |
| |
This is a nicely written and realistic story but it is rather short and very little actually happens. (6/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
deepbluemm
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 6, 2003 |
| |
Hi EG
Thank you for this beautiful story. I love the innocent way that it was written. From the subs point of view. Fantastic honey. You can't beat a real perspective like this. Ahhhh, the beauty that you have created blows me away. Happy to correspond.
Mike (9/10)
|
|
|
About 