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It Was Meant To Be
Author: Emma No knickers
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(Added on Dec 10, 2000)
(This month 43076 readers) (Total 81260 readers) |
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A fantasy story based on a real event I witnessed. where a girl see's her friend humiliated but ends up getting even more herself. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
Rating: (5/10) |
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Reviewer:
Artty
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May 8, 2016 |
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It's a shame it's so short but loved what was written. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
Bellatheslut
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May 15, 2012 |
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One of my favourite stories anywhere and guaranteed to make me wet in an instant. I only wish there was more of it, as I'd love to know what happens afterwards. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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Another nice humiliation tale. Believability is stretched a bit at times, but that takes nothing away from the enjoyability. JJ (8/10)
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Reviewer:
luka
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Sep 22, 2005 |
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Another 10 for your most autobiographical story *just guessing* (10/10)
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Reviewer:
gillian
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Mar 2, 2004 |
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Why so short (7/10)
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Reviewer:
don11
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Apr 14, 2003 |
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Emma, you seem to have found a niche for yourself. Well done (8/10)
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Reviewer:
Tarano
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Dec 8, 2002 |
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Good story. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
sk6007 |
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Feb 28, 2001 |
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Great Story,only too short. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Experienced |
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Feb 17, 2001 |
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while the erotic imagery and obscene depictions are 100% accurate, the EXTREME
youth of the Dominant figures is simply too far fetched to be accepted. Males aged 11 to 13 are physically
incapable of producing Cum and added to that error is the inherent cruelty of the
abuse they inflict upon the older girls. Making one of the young tormentors the
YOUNGER brother of one of the victims is simply too absurd to be accepted.
The conclusion of this tale is weak and abrupt and when coupled with the
weaknesses mentioned above it simply drags this tale down TOO far to be
enjoyed. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
eldon |
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Jan 2, 2001 |
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It's like reading a novel that you can't put down. There are some training items that I would like to own. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Dec 16, 2000 |
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I just love these stories, but this one was too short. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
hyphen 666 |
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Dec 15, 2000 |
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Not very original and bordering on the unbelievable, even if it is set in the former motherland. The author also gets a failing grade in proof reading. I know, picky, picky, picky. (5/10)
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