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The Poker Party
Author: Herdir
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(Added on Mar 26, 2003)
(This month 24885 readers) (Total 58330 readers) |
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Three guys use a fourth's wife repeatedly after discovering her submissive nature. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 26, 2006 |
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i liked the story, just wish you had made it NC it would have really added alot to the story (7/10)
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WackySpurtz
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Oct 28, 2004 |
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Wife is a little tooo eager, the little beaver. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lascivious
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Oct 26, 2004 |
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I am glad you are not discouraged by any negative opinions and still working on it. Part I is still my fantasy. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
fasloth
(Edit) (Oct 22, 2004)
- Glad you enjoyed it - part 2 will be uploaded shortly. Part 3 later.
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| Reviewer:
fasloth
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Oct 25, 2004 |
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Thanks for all the reviews - please be patient about the content. This is a work in progress and there are two more parts to come. Based on the ratings I get many of you don't like it, which is cool - we all like different stuff. All I will say is that there is some NC stuff coming, along with some more forced scat. In fairness to post this message I rated it based on the average of 6 you all have given it. - Herdir (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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Oct 23, 2004 |
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Nothing subtle about this story. Makes me wonder how a wife could so willingly submit to such trash. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
weaseltooth
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May 1, 2004 |
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Verry good story, would like to see more by this author. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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I thought your story was pretty good but it seemed rushed. Events happened too fast and then they just stopped (5/10)
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emmaadmirer
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Apr 7, 2003 |
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I didn't like everything, but hey, this is your story and I hope you will write more. I loved her to have to stay under the table and suck them off, while they were playing cards. (I would love to put this in my story, but you were quicker) (9/10)
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RTNYMaster
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Mar 28, 2003 |
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The writing is passable, the story is shallow and boring. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
don11
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Mar 27, 2003 |
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Not my thing - attracted by the title. (6/10)
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