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Dominating Charlene
Author: Powerone
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(Added on Mar 26, 2003)
(This month 16671 readers) (Total 40207 readers) |
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This is two stories of Charlene as she learns that she loves to be dominated. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
rcb
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Apr 6, 2003 |
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The story flows - I'm just not sure where. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
anguisette
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Apr 1, 2003 |
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i enjoyed the story, but i also noticed the grammatical errors. however, they didn't jump out at me as much as the storyline itself-- it is a great topic for consideration, but just lacks too much detail. the concepts presented are not well-worded at all, and while they certainly provoked an image or two, they didn't make me "feel like i was there." with a lot of attention given to detail, this could be an amazing story. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Mar 29, 2003 |
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This was an interesting story, however there were a few too many grammatical errors for my taste. Also, there were some sentences separated where they should have been compounded. Content-wise, it was a lot of fun to read, but the grammar detracted somewhat from my enjoyment. (7/10)
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redEva
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Mar 28, 2003 |
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Well written and easy to read as usual. Powerone is one of the most talented writers (at least in my opinion) on this site. (9/10)
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