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The Perfect Wife
Author: Ninja Turtle
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(Added on Mar 12, 2003)
(This month 38460 readers) (Total 66383 readers) |
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It was the spring of my senior year in college and my father let me know in no uncertain terms, I needed to come home with a diploma and a fiance. I would then start the process of running the family interests and that job required the perfect wife on my arm. This is the story of that perfect wife. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pollycoventry
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Aug 4, 2007 |
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fantastic start. I hope the story keeps up (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 17, 2004 |
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realisitc or not????? (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
bobanddianne
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Aug 2, 2003 |
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Great story of a submissive girl being pushed up to and then beyond her limits... and accepting her new life at those limits. Well written and developed from an erotic standpoint. (10/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Mar 15, 2003 |
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Just OK. First of all the story ranks pretty low on my credibility scale -- i.e. that a woman described as affluent and intelligent would consent to marriage with a jerk like Miller. Especially after he reads her his list of marital stipulations.<br>Structurally there are problems, too. The story is told in the first person, but the author describes events that occurred while he was not present, and which it seems unlikely anyone would ever have told him about -- the details of the dressing scene, the boy waiting in the lobby, etc.<br>Lastly there was more carelessness in spelling than one would like -- "lomsuine" {limousine} "jewlery" "unbeliving" "opulant" to name a few that jumped out at me. The author clearly has some talent, but is capable of a much better effort. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
blackshadowmast
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Mar 13, 2003 |
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Ahh to be rich and powerfull. Lucky man to have such a slut. (9/10)
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redEva
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Mar 13, 2003 |
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truly enjoyable, i love Stevens demeanor and the ideas of body modifications. Suzan is one lucky slut! (9/10)
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