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Author: Doush
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(Added on Feb 11, 2003)
(This month 42668 readers) (Total 96526 readers) |
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A successful slaver has begun turning her slaves into functional pieces of furniture and extravagant pieces of art. When another prominent female slaver pays her a visit, triple-cross follows double-cross amidst bondage, torture and murder. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Jul 17, 2003 |
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(Jul 17) Up to chapter 5. Story progressing well. Highly readable. Nice bondage, but could be spiced up with more sex scenes.
(Mar 23) Very enjoyable and a little different to the usual sex and violence. I like the light plot-driven writing style, which contains some delicious details. Doush is developing into a very fluent writer, in the mould of Leviticus, but perhaps with greater wit. One criticism: Whilst many will find the bondage scenarios a turn on, more sexual scenes would broaden the story's appeal. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 7, 2003 |
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The slow buildup in this story is what is really turning me on. The suspense is great! (8/10)
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RTNYMaster
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Feb 11, 2003 |
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Fairly decent writing but a somewhat weak storyline. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lady Blade
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Feb 11, 2003 |
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I like this. Nice twists at the end of the first Chapter. Can't wait to see more of it. Definately has my interest. The only reason I could not give it a 10/10 was because there was some grammar in the beginning that was a little shaky. Once past that, however, very well done. Work a bit on your technical grammar and you definately have a winner. (9/10)
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