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A Slave's Ordeal
Author: Raskolnikov
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(Added on Jan 7, 2003)
(This month 10332 readers) (Total 22016 readers) |
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This one is about a 4 hour ordeal a novice had waiting for his Mistress to show up. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
le forgeron
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Aug 1, 2003 |
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At least the grammar is ok.
Could be classified "m-self" rather than "F/m".
Some stress are missing. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
slavetobenamed
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Apr 2, 2003 |
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I really did not enjoy it it lacked something. (4/10)
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