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Jake's Slaves
Author: Xodus
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(Added on Jan 4, 2003)
(This month 29771 readers) (Total 74708 readers) |
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A story of slavery and love. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
fundagirl
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Nov 29, 2014 |
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Fantastic story. Great development of plot. I liked all the characters. I would have loved to see more embarassing situations for Heather.
Hope to see another part (10/10)
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rosh
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Oct 11, 2007 |
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waiting for the part 3 (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
compliant
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Feb 14, 2005 |
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so it has been awhile since you last wrote chapter 2. i have been looking forward to chapter 3 for a long time. please write some more it was a horny story (9/10)
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delish
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Nov 27, 2004 |
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It's a good, solid story, and there's something for everyone in it. The characters could've been a bit better developed, as they seemed slightly cardboard, but that seemed to improve later on. I look forward to reading more. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Oct 24, 2004 |
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I could hardly stay awake with Jake. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jun 28, 2004 |
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truely wonderful i cant wait for more to come!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 11, 2004 |
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when does it continue?? (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
btfq
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Jan 14, 2003 |
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Wow! This story has it all. Graphic language (I love nasty, direct talk), vivid descriptions, rough & extreme fucking, a methodical, intense, experienced & hard Dom. No annoying, distracting plot. Deserves more than 10, really. (First time I've been moved to review). (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Xodus
(Edit) (Jan 14, 2003)
- Thanks, btfg :)
Part Three should be out within a few weeks.
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| Reviewer:
revaler
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Jan 6, 2003 |
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Great story, I'm looking forward to read the second part. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Xodus
(Edit) (Jan 6, 2003)
- Thanks Rev
Glad you enjoyed it :)
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| Reviewer:
DaveH
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Jan 5, 2003 |
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A fantastic beginning! Very well written, the exuded fear from the female characters is portrayed very realistically. Great descriptions of the toys involved. Looking forward to more parts! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Xodus
(Edit) (Jan 5, 2003)
- Thanks for your input :)<br>Part 2 should be out soon.
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| Reviewer:
Firepager
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Jan 4, 2003 |
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Great first chapter, I can't wait to read the next one. I just hope it is soon (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Xodus
(Edit) (Jan 5, 2003)
- Thanks :)
Part 2 should be posted soon.
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