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Let's Make a Deal
Author: Kallie Thomas
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(Added on Dec 30, 2002)
(This month 17828 readers) (Total 43218 readers) |
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Three teens get in over their heads when they try to sell the drugs they find in a bus station bathroom. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nakdsub
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Mar 22, 2008 |
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I guess there will not be any more episodes of this one either. Too bad. Great start. (9/10)
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Zubisco
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Sep 11, 2005 |
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A very nasty story, innocents get screwed over for no fault of theirs. Yet very well written, pace is great. (9/10)
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littleslut
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Aug 3, 2004 |
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a wonderful highly orginal peice (9/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 2, 2004 |
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I have never read a bad story by you,, i hope one day to delvelop the same talent for wrtinig, but until then i will simply continue to enjoy all your outstanding works, wish i could go higher then a 10 :) (10/10)
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emilynh
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Jan 7, 2003 |
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As usual, an intelligent, well-written and compelling story. I was thrilled at the M/m aspect here and would urge you to write more in that vein.
emilynh (9/10)
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LaJan
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Jan 1, 2003 |
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Damn. I hate it when I am conflicted like this about a story. First, this was very well written (with the exception of the anal rape: I can't figure out how the rapist can look into the victim's face while the victim is laying on her stomach. Did I miss something?). The plot was very well told and it had me surprised right up to the end. But there's no way I can recommend a story with a "victim" this young. OK, so I'm a hypocrite: condoning the value of rape stories yet condemning the fictitious assault of minors. I rated this story as highly as I possibly could while maintaining consistency with my personal feelings. But nothing will change the fact that the writer is very, very good and her work should be seen as talented as well. Note: The coding for this piece is incorrect. For people who read reviews before reading stories, I will say nothing more to avoid spoiling the plot before it's read. But be advised that you will be in for more than the coding the author supplied. Peace. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Kallie Thomas
(Edit) (Jan 1, 2003)
- Ack! You are so right on the coding! <smacks forehead> Sorry, folks!
And thank you for the kind review, LaJan :-)
Kallie
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