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Descent
Author: rebel
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(Added on Nov 12, 2002)
(This month 13597 readers) (Total 29509 readers) |
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He took a woman, and brought her down, step by step.. to show her what she was, but how low she could go? |
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Weighed
Average (?): (5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Reviewer:
BDSM_Tourguide
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Rating: |
Nov 13, 2002 |
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I enjoyed the story a lot. I like the humiliation aspect of it the most. However, it doesn't seem to flow very fluidly. The description is a little hard to follow. Also, I would prefer not to see words used like "thru." It is a good piece of work though. I will definitely be reading the updates as they come. (5/10)
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