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Amanda's Big Mistake
Author: Angelgirl
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(Added on Nov 4, 2002)
(This month 23457 readers) (Total 67172 readers) |
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Amanda awakes only to find she is strapped down on a table. As she desperately tries to understand what is happening; her mind begins to play tricks with her. This is a true story. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
headhunter
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Oct 11, 2005 |
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This is one of the best-written stories I have read. The author is obviously well-educated and has a wonderful flair for storytelling. And a really sick imagination -- like mine! I want to read the rest of her (?) stories.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
angelgirl
(Edit) (Oct 28, 2005)
- "Master" headhunter,,,,,
I'm at a loss for words. You have no idea how happy it makes me to know you liked my story so much. Thank you,,thank you,,,thank you.
Love
Angelgirl
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 25, 2005 |
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Great Story. If you forget it a dream, then the ending will remind you. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
angelgirl
(Edit) (May 1, 2005)
- La Toya,,,, Everyone is going to think you must be my best friend, HA HA .
I Love you
Angelgirl
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 3, 2004 |
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great idea, themem and story, Amanda is going to have a real hard time with this nad the fatc the the story is true makes it more enjoyable to read
Everything she will face, it also shows how the mind can affect your emotions under circumstances
Thev mind isd a dangerous organ to mess with, is it reality or is it fantasy, and how do you make yourself accept it is real ifyou are not sure yourself
looking forward to many more chapters (9/10)
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- Replied by:
angelgirl
(Edit) (Oct 1, 2004)
- Thank you so much Mkemse. As you might have noticed; I have been in a really big slump for the past two years. I am writing again now and hope to post soon. I really need to be encouraged and your nice note really helps.
Thank you again.
Angelgirl
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| Reviewer:
le forgeron
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Aug 7, 2003 |
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Will the dream comes true ?
That's not an ending, just a beginning! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Silenteyes
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Feb 23, 2003 |
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excellent story! I couldn't stop reading! I can't wait to read more of the wonderful work you have to offer! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
robert216
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Nov 9, 2002 |
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The story should be told from either Mandi's POV or a 3rd party POV. The story line is rather extreme, with a surprise ending. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
angelgirl
(Edit) (Nov 20, 2002)
Hi Robert
Does that mean you liked it or hated it? These stories about Amanda's misadventures are my first attempt at writing. They are based loosely on true
events in mine and my sisters lives. My next stories,[if I decide to write more] will be fiction. They won't be quite as extreme.
Love
Angelgirl
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