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New Job
Author: Jan Wright
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(Added on Oct 11, 2000)
(This month 11416 readers) (Total 24795 readers) |
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Girl gets a new job in a bondage factory. Her job is letting customers test new equipment on her. |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jan 13, 2004 |
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Clearly a fantasy story, anyone looking for real-life should look elsewhere. There are many good and interesting ideas that keep the readers interest, but odd sentence structure, such as inconsistent verb tenses (some past tense, some present tense, some a form of grammatical shorthand.
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RocketMan
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Oct 16, 2003 |
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Enjoyrd it very much, made Me want to buy stock in a Company like that. Wonder what the stock holder meetings are like :-) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan |
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Mar 22, 2001 |
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"I struggled for hours and got know were"
The story is full of this kind of stuff. It has to be on purpose. Nobody could be
this dumb. (1/10)
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Ricardo |
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Oct 22, 2000 |
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A great concept poorly, very poorly executed. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
L.M. |
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Oct 12, 2000 |
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Kinda weak. Not much devolopment but i do want to see more (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
topwhip |
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Oct 12, 2000 |
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A little mundane and lack luster, no real punch to it (3/10)
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