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Playtime With Noreen
Author: Coyote
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(Added on Sep 27, 2002)
(This month 33055 readers) (Total 71596 readers) |
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A 12 year old boy videotapes a woman having sex with two young girls and uses the tape as blackmail when he and two of his friends show up at her home for an afternoon of fun and punishment. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
notlem
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Apr 9, 2012 |
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cannot download story (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 29, 2004 |
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you have done it again (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
gillian
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Nov 8, 2003 |
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very good it made me wet, i wish i had been there. (9/10)
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mmm
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Sep 17, 2003 |
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no sequelae please...enough sadism! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
tttttt
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Sep 17, 2003 |
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almost cummed while enjoying her humiliation....should have taken photos of her abuse to own her more.
children should not read this anyway! (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Aug 31, 2003 |
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It is one of the most exciting stories on the web. I hope you are going to write the sequel. Please. (10/10)
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Nitrofox
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Jun 24, 2003 |
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I really dislike this story. It constantly repeats its terminology, making the reader feel like an idiot. The whole situation is unrealistic. However, the writing is good, and it has separate paragraphs. My rating went to a zero when I saw that the author had reviewed his own story. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 2, 2003 |
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Starts well but becomes increasingly boring and repetitive as it goes on. It also jumped around too much in first half, as though it was written as a screenplay. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Nov 3, 2002 |
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Whilst the story is generally literate and the writing has energy, ultimately it becomes somewhat repetitive, particularly in the chosen terminology in the dialogues. Content-wise I tried to stay objective, but it was difficult. The sexualisation of underage girls does not make for pleasurable reading in my opinion. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
coyote
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Oct 4, 2002 |
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Absolutely great. No outlandish gimmicks. Just pure, realistic,blackmail humiliation and a perfectly hapless, well-whipped victim. Long but a very good read with excellent dialogue. Wonderful to see what horny kids would like to do to an older woman completely under their control. Poor Noreen. She really gets it. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Jacen
(Edit) (Oct 7, 2002)
- a author reviewing their own story? how crass..
- Replied by:
ladys_maid
(Edit) (May 2, 2003)
- What a loser!!
- Replied by:
Nitrofox
(Edit) (Jun 24, 2003)
- Coyote, I would just like to say that you have managed to earn yourself a 1 from for this idiocy. Congratulations, I hope you enjoy getting low ratings.
- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Aug 31, 2003)
- He tries to explain what is erotic about his story and I agree absolutely with him. Well done.
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