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Princess and the Snake Pit
Author: Dan the Man
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(Added on Sep 6, 2002)
(This month 19647 readers) (Total 40950 readers) |
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A unique brand of snake trainer tells the story of the sacrifice demanded of a young egyptian princess. What happens when you mix a pit of snakes and a princess? |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
velvetdreams21
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Apr 14, 2007 |
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gotta admit, this has got to be the best story ive ever read on bdsmlibrary.com and that is saing a lot cause i have read prolly far too many of the stories on here. i absolutly loved the orgasm control and how she had to suffer so much sexually, it was by far the biggest turn on ive prolly ever had. i do however wish the story was a lot longer. maybe next time u should elaborate mre on the suffering and instead of having it be like 2 ages long for an all day and nite situation, maybe try for at least 5 pages and really work the suffering into it, that s the only reason its getting a 9 instead of 10. i can only pray that u come out with more stories like this one. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
stargentle
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Sep 17, 2002 |
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great story.. really like reading non-common things .. great imagination! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
omechron
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Sep 11, 2002 |
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Most excellent, with only one little problem near the end: "Unzipped"? Did they have zippers in ancient egypt? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
tsosie
(Edit) (Sep 15, 2002)
- Congrats, you have succeeded in making me slam my head against the table mumbling, "duh." I'll be sure to be more careful in the future :)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Sep 8, 2002 |
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Finally an author that asp-ires to greatness. With a charming heroine - I think I'll adder to my list of favorite Egyptian beauties. Although I wouldn't say that this story is boa-ring, it is a bit one-dimensional, which keeps me from giving Dan the bush-master an even higher rating. (7/10)
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hyphen666
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Sep 7, 2002 |
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At long last, something that smacks of originality. I am delighted.Even though this is a variation on a theme, the author uses it to good advantage. On the other hand the story deserved better proof reading than it got, and there were some crimes against grammar very much in evidence. As usual, my rating does not adhere to the review by the number standards that seem to be in vogue these days. (8/10)
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tsosie
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Sep 7, 2002 |
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Kind of a cheesy self advertisement but I'm allowed to have an opinion. I personally think it is a better writing style than many stories I've read. I do know it's not among the better stories, it is my first try. I do want to know what you people think, after all, you are the target audience :) (7/10)
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