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The Collectors
Author: Coyote
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(Added on Aug 6, 2002)
(This month 20720 readers) (Total 46449 readers) |
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Three debt collectors pay a visit to a teenage boy with a gambling problem. The boy can't pay but when his mother comes home, she is made to. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
boc0175
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Aug 2, 2006 |
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Excelent, I await the continuation impatiently (10/10)
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boc0175
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Dec 18, 2004 |
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Very well written (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 28, 2004 |
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as with all your stories this one was great (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
simon
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Jan 30, 2004 |
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particularly well written! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Dec 8, 2002 |
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This is a great story, and I look forward to the next chapter. I agree with Slavgrrl, in that all the repetitive written screams, and the ie at the ends of words were rather annoying. Besides that, it was a fun story ... I love incest stories. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
DaveH
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Nov 1, 2002 |
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Plain and simple, an incredible delight for fans of non-consensual/humiliation erotic literature. Intense, painfully humiliating, degrading activity in a gang-setting with helpless victims. The correlation between stories like these and their lengths is critical for quality, and Coyote's stories always have the length factor well intact. Very arousing. (9/10)
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slavgrrl
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Aug 13, 2002 |
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I think the use of the "ie" ending for every other word distracted from the story. For example "nakie, assie... on and on" Nothing original in the actual story and difficult to read due to odd grammar. (2/10)
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hyphen666
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Aug 6, 2002 |
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Nasty, ugly and mean spirited are some of the adjectives that come to mind to describe this story. Then again that's the way things sometimes go even in the real world. Give me realism over political correctness every time! This one is a winner. My rating has nothing to do with "it's worth reading" I hate crutches! (7/10)
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