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Families Compete
Author: Chum
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(Added on Jul 29, 2002)
(This month 74333 readers) (Total 104455 readers) |
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Two couples with varying levels of experience, both with teenage daughters, sign up to compete for one available membership in a bdsm club. One daughter knows what she wants, the other has no clue what awaits at the club's tropical resort. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
willman
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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Very erotic a little something for everybody. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Scaramouche
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Aug 3, 2006 |
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Another great story. Very clever ending. (8/10) (9/10)
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Reviewer:
dragontwin
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Sep 8, 2002 |
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Well written.Very sexual in content. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Aug 5, 2002 |
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I detect a lot of Phil Phantom in this tale, a good choice as a model for the aspiring author of family based sex stories. This one is well written and has a logical plot that allows all the sexual bases to be covered.Since this is a fantasy I'll avoid any comments on 14 inch cocks and 14 year old girls who are masochistic nymphomaniacs, not to mention their perfectly formed mothers who seem to be equally afflicted. This one has something for everyone, and does a very good job of describing the action.I liked the ending, which can be a problem for many authors just beginning their careers. I look forward to more from this author. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
Marcus
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Aug 2, 2002 |
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Good writing. I like the light tone. The 'family' appeal (now there's a double meaning!) is not really my cup of tea, else I might have rated it higher. Maybe someone else will... (7/10)
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