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Enslavement
Author: Stavros1972
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(Added on Oct 18, 2015)
(This month 43800 readers) (Total 43800 readers) |
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In the Femslave world, Angie, a former employee of an enslavement facility, finds herself as one of the naked women awaiting the enslavement process |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
gkp00co
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Nov 17, 2015 |
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I concur with the others but have a different set of peeves. First, the spelling errors. "she offered no resistance as Daryl grabbed her by the waste and brought her in close" Where, precisely did Daryl put his hand and is he going to wash it afterword?
I, too would have liked to understand why the girls, Angie particularly, were in this predicament. In addition, she goes <POOF!> and disappears. How did she feel when she was on the block, looking out and seeing Jared and others she likely recognized, bidding on her as if she was an marginally domesticated animal? Jared presumably didn't bid on her -- did he warn any of his friends that this particular slave flesh will be trouble? Did she sell for peanuts (or not at all)? (7/10)
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Pod423
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Nov 16, 2015 |
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<br /><b>Warning</b>: Function eregi_replace() is deprecated in <b>/home/bdsmlibr/public_html/stories/review_add.php</b> on line <b>40</b><br />The story I believe has a great story line. Some of the descriptions of the environment around were hard to follow and envision. I would really like to know the next part of this story. (7/10)
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Major Littmann
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Nov 12, 2015 |
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Overly clinical, Documentary style yet no real back story. Competent writing but no flair, depilation with all the style of being gunged at Noels House Party. Come on, shaving a woman completely is one of my favourite scenarios, worth at least a page of text yet there is no real excitement or sexual thrills. Sorry but 7/10 is all I can give. (7/10)
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mrfrosty
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Nov 8, 2015 |
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I liked the story but you need to explain why Angie is forced into slavery (7/10)
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