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Girl Friends Mischief
Author: Bondage luver
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(Added on Aug 25, 2012)
(This month 21920 readers) (Total 39270 readers) |
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My Girlfriend takes control then hands it over to her friend |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Sep 1, 2012 |
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Very nice story, I really enjoyed it and hope there will be more. I really appreciated that the girlfriend did nothing more than have drinks while at the bar, as I was worried for a moment this would take the same cuckold road as so many stories. If this continues as a D/s love story between the two it's going to be a good story. The creativity was nice, so let's start off with a ranking of 9 and see where we go. (9/10)
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chuck
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Aug 29, 2012 |
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Very nice story. I like the attention to details, the ingenuity in play, and his reactions to his predicaments. The fact that there is more to the relationship than just BDSM is a plus as well. I liked the ending (though it begs for a continuation). I could feel him slipping deeper into a more submissive state as she plays with his mind. I agree with the first reviewer... a name for the girlfriend would add a lot and, for you, it would probably make the story easier to write. (10/10)
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gilgamekk
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Aug 26, 2012 |
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The girlfriend really IS very creative, and to achieve that YOU (the author) had to be very creative. You maintain a consistent level of intensity throughout (which is good). my only complaint is that you never give the girlfriend a name. Constantly referring to her as "my girlfriend" is distracting. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Iluvbondage
(Edit) (Aug 28, 2012)
- Thank you for the encouragement. My first attempt and I value and appreciate your constructive comments and criticism. Regards
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